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#20917

OMG: I loved you
I hated you
i lived in the land of explosions and
droughts where tears were the only water
yours and mine, I think we're probably better apart
i can't for now, but i think of the maybe day when i can properly wish you well without thoughts laced with bitterness
in my headspace
I maybe love you still
I maybe hate you
I muse, goodbye


7 comments

  1. AnonymousMay 6, 2015 at 10:48 AM

    I loved poo
    I hated poo
    i lived in the land of assplosions and
    farts where piss was the only water
    yours and mine, I think we're probably better apart
    i can't for now, but i think of the maybe day when i can properly flush you well without thoughts laced with bitterness
    in my buttspace
    I maybe love poo still
    I maybe hate pp
    I muse, goodbye

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  2. AnonymousMay 6, 2015 at 9:25 PM

    You're gay and I'm going to punch you in the fuckin' face. How is that for prose?

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  3. AnonymousMay 7, 2015 at 10:57 PM

    Good job OP. Thanks for sharing that. I liked the "i lived in the land of explosions and droughts where tears were the only water" part the best.

    Also about the "but i think of the maybe day when i can" part, I really like the "maybe day" concept and the phrasing's got a nice bounce to it.

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  4. AnonymousMay 8, 2015 at 9:05 PM

    It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.
    I like sushi. Let's fuck.

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  5. AnonymousMay 9, 2015 at 1:44 AM

    miso soup miso sad

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